In Susy’s (2011) article entitled “Speaking up for the mother tongue”, she asserts that 'English language skills' are beneficial only in the short-run and it carries unexpected ‘negative consequences’ in the long-run for the people and nation itself. The ‘negative consequences’ are the growing disparity between the educated and non-educated, social problems that will arise because of this disparity and restricting more people towards contribution to ‘larger development aims’. The difficulty faced in learning languages in schools still prevails in many countries. Much efforts have been made to promote “mother tongue-based multilingual education projects” across school systems in an attempt to preserve and develop their unique cultural distinctiveness and at the same time encourage people to learn internationally recognized languages for economic and social purposes. She points out that “mother tongue-based multilingual education projects” fails because people do not see the need of preserving cultural distinctiveness. Susy lastly asserts that teachers, education and finance ministries should work together to emphasize the need to learn both Mother Tongue and English language and improve education standards.
In this increasingly globalized world, the exchange of culture and mobility undeniably pose a serious threat towards preserving cultural distinctiveness. I personally agree with Susy that Mother Tongue should be given more attention. However, I felt that the 'English language skills' that she discussed in this article mainly focused on the 'negative consequences' that it carries. It could be discussed more positively.
I agree with Susy that we should ‘speak up for the mother tongue’ and her claim that “mother tongue-based multilingual education projects” fails mainly because its importance is not well understood. Learning mother tongue language is important because it preserves the unique cultural identity and the language itself. However, in this globalised world, many cultural distinctiveness have been slowly eroding because only ‘prestigious languages’ such as English are prioritized. In the case of a bilingual nation such as Singapore, even though mother tongue remains a compulsory language in primary and secondary school, her priority is more inclined towards English. This is evident in the difference in theimportance of English and mother tongue grades. It is important to pass English and less important to pass mother tongue. In fact, unlike English, passing mother tongue is not a prerequisite to enter tertiary institutions. It is hence important to ‘speak up for the mother tongue’ in Singapore because being bilingual is a distinct feature of our nation and we should work towards a more balanced bilingual education by inculcating the importance of mother tongue.
However, I agree to a small extent that ‘English language skills’ are only beneficial in the short-run and it carries ‘negative consequences’ in the long-run. English is a universal language and it has both short-term and long-term benefits. As mentioned by Susy, it is true that English is beneficial for economic opportunities. Many jobs require ‘English language skills’ and it is beneficial for those who are climbing up the social ladder by acquiring a better job overseas. It is not necessarily fully harmful in the long-run. In the article, Susy mentions that ‘English language skills’ would widen the gap between the educated and non-educated which would cause social problems. I personally think otherwise. I believe that learning a common language would improve social problems because many social problems arise due to misunderstanding between people with different backgrounds. Besides being able to better understand each other, learning English allows people of different backgrounds to have something in common. In the case of Singapore, I believe that English is important for social harmony in the long-run especially when it is a country filled with diverse racial and cultural identities. Without a common language, there will be a greater social gap between different racial group. Hence, I agree to a small extent that ‘English language skills’ would only bring harm in the long run.
In conclusion, this article brought up a social problem that prevails in many countries today. It definitely did its part in promoting the importance of mother tongue. I personally think that both English and mother tongue should be given equal priority as they are equally important. I hope that Singapore will continue to work hard towards a bilingual nation and inculcate the importance of our racial identity and distinctiveness to the younger generations.
Bibliography
Speaking up for the mother tongue Susy Ndaruhutse Guardian Weekly
http://www.theguardian.com/education/2011/feb/08/tefl-languages
Hello Xenia!
ReplyDeleteHere are some minor things that we've noticed while reading through your draft :) We could see both of your arguments very clearly from the second paragraph. Though, perhaps you could have a main thesis statement that links both of your main ideas together (aka finding the common ground between ‘giving more attention to Mother tongue’ and your point on how ‘English language skills’ bring about both short term and long term benefits).
“I agree to a small extent” is slightly confusing, it took us a while to understand if you were agreeing or disagreeing, might help if you could rephrase it so it delivers your point more clearly!
Overall it's well-structured and we definitely gained new perspectives on this topic after reading through this ^^
- Pavi and Janelle
Thank you, Xenia, for braving this article for your reader response. Generally you seem to do a decent job summarizing it (though there are some problems; see below).
ReplyDeleteYour focus needs to be clearer though, and a more obvious thesis placed earlier in the response would probably help you.
Note this sentence: It is hence important to ‘speak up for the mother tongue’ in Singapore because being bilingual is a distinct feature of our nation and we should work towards a more balanced bilingual education by inculcating the importance of mother tongue.
Is this a potential thesis?
Other language issues:
1) In Susy’s (2011) article ... > You need to use the surname, Ndaruhutse.
2) ...it carries unexpected ‘negative consequences’ in the long-run for the people and nation itself. > it? which people? which nation? These must be clear in your summary.
3) Much efforts > count noun requires 'many'
4) projects” fails >
5) mainly focused on the 'negative consequences' that it carries. > what does 'it' refer to?
6) projects” fails mainly because its importance > agreement/pronoun referent
7) many cultural distinctiveness > many?
Thanks again for working on this!
Hi Mr Brad,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your detailed feedback! I've taken all your constructive feedbacks and will definitely come back with a better draft! :)
Thank you Pavi and Janelle! I'm pretty confused about my thesis statement too! Thanks for pointing that out! I'll definitely improve it and bring my central idea across clearly :)
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